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Tsumi Buredo
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Basic Character Information: Buredo, Tsumi Alias / Nickname: N/A Age: 16- 24th of July. Gender: Male Appearance: Tsumi Buredo weighs in at an even 150 Pounds, and stands at 6”2. Tsumi has a rather scrawny build and, much to his dismay, no matter how much he eats, he just can’t seem to gain any weight. He has unruly, silvery-white hair, which goes just about every direction. Tsumi’s eyes are Dichromatic, his “normal eye” is a subtle grey, while the other is a complete negative image, the whites of the eye having turned black, while the iris turned white. As for clothing, Tsumi prefers his metal vest, metal gloves, and stretchable pants, which easily cope with sudden movement. His pants are made up of three layers: On the outside, there are overlapping metal plates, which offered decent defense, while not hindering movement. Next, there is generic chain mail, which further boosts his defense, while augmenting mobility. On the inside, there is a layer of seal skin, which keeps Tsumi’s legs dry and comfortable at all times. On Tsumi’s chest is a birthmark, in the shape of a Z. This set of clothes was given to Tsumi by Raxino, a descendant of Kurcet, who struck a deal with Tsumi. The deal was, if Tsumi could beat Raxino with any one weapon in the shop, he would forge him the clothes free of charge, but if he failed, he would have to work at the blacksmith shop, with no pay, for five years. Tsumi chose a sword, while Raxino chose a chain of daggers he had made himself. Tsumi, deciding that a chain of daggers was more arrogant than dangerous, easily disarmed Raxino, knocked him down, and pointed his sword at Raxino's neck, before walking away. Of course, both Tsumi and Raxino were novices back then, with no idea of how to fight. Personality: Tsumi is a rather strange individual. He is very sarcastic, while kind at the same time. Tsumi has a very strong sense of right and wrong, and intervenes into the simplest of conflicts. Tsumi does not understand his own mortality, and would gladly sacrifice himself for a good cause. He is a naturally brave soul, with one exception, GIRLS. He cannot talk to anything female, and usually gets a bit nervous when a girl talks to him, to the point where he's actually developed a bit of a phobia towards women, and will sometimes go as far as running away, should the presence become too much for him. He knows nothing about romance, so, when the topic is brought up, he becomes quiet. In fact, Tsumi is VERY shy. He can become quite talkative once he's ready, but until then, he generally recedes away from real conversation. However, he enjoys being pushed to the point of shyness, as he is secretly a Masochist. In fact, he's been known to smile broadly during spars with other ninja, for no good reason at all. Tsumi can usually withstand a girl’s presence once he gets to know them enough. Tsumi finds new motivation every time someone shows that they have genuine faith in him. He also enjoys being social and talking to others, after he gets used to them, though he doesn’t work well in a group he doesn’t know. He can easily coordinate with his group, once he actually knows them, though. A clear head is the key to any win, and that’s exactly what Tsumi tells himself during every fight. Your Ninja Way: “If you aren’t having fun, you’re doing it wrong!” Goals: - Trying every food in the world - Becoming a Jounin -Making as many friends as he can.
Role Information: Title: Chuunin Rank: B Residency: Seikogakure Organization | Group: N/A
Skill Information: Skill Specialty: - Main: Ninjutsu - Sub: Weaponry Elemental Affinity:- Main: Raiton - Sub: Katon - Advanced: N/A
Special Characteristics: - SC’s:
Name: Advanced Speed
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Description: Training in high-speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform on the level of olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run 15% faster than their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.
Name: Enhanced Acrobatics
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Description: Through much training, the ninja has become proficient in the arts of aerialism, to the point that they are now much more flexible than their peers. They are able to not only do incredible feats using aerial maneuvers such as flips and corkscrews, but they can also bend and rotate their bodies in ways their peers wouldn’t be able to do.
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this, the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack, however, using only one hand slows casting.
Name: Large Chakra Capacity
Rank: B
Type: Chakra-Based
Description: The ninja continues their mediation and physical training which further increases their chakra capacity. Ninja with large chakra capacities have an increased chakra of +15%
Name: Ninjutsu Adept
Rank: B
Type: Chakra Based
Description: A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their Ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 15% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu.
Name: Enhanced Accuracy
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Description: A skill gained by ninja who have begun to specialize in throwing weapons. From a combination of practice and natural talent the ninja starts to acquire an enhanced accuracy which allows them to hit multiple targets in precise locations along with hurling their weapons at a greater speed.
Name: Blurred Hand Movement
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Description: A skillful and convenient characteristic that is learned to those who have practiced in the art of hand speed movement in nearly all forms. There are many uses for this characteristic, as it can enhance nearly all forms of specializations. It is essentially the practice of moving and manipulating your hands with expert efficiency to the point where they become a blur. With this special characteristic a ninja can perform any number of hand seals within seconds or instantly depending on the amount of seals necessary. This allows them to execute techniques faster than the opponent can perceive, providing no Perception-based Special Characteristics are present.
Name: Improved Perception
Rank: C
Type: Mental Based
Description: The ninja trains their skill in perception and analyzing their environment to more distinct levels. Most physical motions are identified and picked up by the ninja, whether it’s a movement in a leaf or a change in temperature. This skill is handy when faced with Genjutsu as it allows the user to identify the fact they are in an illusion in less time and with less clues than one would otherwise need. However although they can sense the Genjutsu they must rely on other methods of breaking the spell. The ninja also becomes extremely perceptive and observant when it comes to people, being able to pick out mood changes or better understand character. In addition, this skill becomes useful in combat, where the Ninja grows to understand the patterns, habits and the 'rhythm' of the opponent over periods of time.
Name: Immense Endurance
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Description: Further training in the discipline of dealing with injury has allowed for the shinobi The possessor of this talent has an increased endurance of double that of their peers which makes them considerably tougher. They are near immune to the sensation of pain which allows them to fight under harsh circumstances with normal efficiency.
Name: Navigator
Rank: C
Type: Mental Based
Physical Requirements: N/A
Training Requirements: A 600 word training post is required to gain this special characteristic.
Description: The ninja gains a unique skill which allows them to have a natural sense of direction and placement. They always know what time it is, what direction they're facing, and even the temperature. With this skill they are exceptionally good at geography, being capable of identifying landscapes while others would be at a loss. They can essentially survive in any environment and always find routes to their destination.
Note: Yes, I’ve used 10 slots. This is due to the 3 that chuunin start with naturally, 2 extra for clanless, and the 5 free slots given by the SC Bonanza event.
History Information: History: - Prologue:
Long ago, a small portion of each Nation broke away from their homes to travel away from the world. All of these villagers happened to be war veterans, or skilled warriors with only one goal in mind: To raise their children away from the violence, cruelty, and anguish that the endless wars of the world contained. To this end, this group of elite fighters travelled deep into the wilderness, past where legends and rumors say to never venture. Eventually, they came to a location where one could not hear the suffering screams of those who chose to fight, and slowly built up a planet to support their children. Of course, no village they could find had achieved the peace they longed for, so they instead chose to forge their own. This Village came to be known as "The Village of Peace".
Several generations later, these ideals had been forgotten, and replaced with the worshipping of a god of war. The children of the village were taught to slaughter anyone they did not trust, and did so without remorse. This “god” was actually a group of three ancient demons: Zo, the demon of sight, Kyn, the demon of power, and Rei, the demon of Wisdom. This group of demons was named “The dark trinity”. Each demon passed a single technique into the hands of the village of peace. These techniques became known as the “Blackheart” fighting style , as it was said that your heart had to be blacker than the darkest shadow to even think of studying these forbidden techniques. In fact, the Blackheart Techniques were so amazingly strong, that the use of a blackheart technique took a third of one’s soul, as payment.
- Younger Days:
“It's a boy, Buredo-san.” Muchina Buredo lay on a hospital bed, crying from the sheer agony of giving birth (which will NOT be described in detail). Medical ninja rushed to her side to see that she was ok, and had not been harmed. “It’s a boy, you say?” she said. “Yes, ma’am. One very pale…” The doctor put his ear to the newborn’s chest. “…suffocating child.” The doctor then realized the severity of his statement, and called the medical ninja over. The head medical ninja calmly walked over, and touched a few of the baby’s chest-related pressure points. Within a few seconds, the baby spat up the fluids that had lodged in its throat, and the baby was handed to Muchina. "I shall name you……..Tsumi. You shall be known as Tsumi Buredo.” The doctor stared at her, eyes wide. "B-but that means SIN! Are you seriously willing to name your own child SIN?!” the doctor said. Muchina turned, and looked at the doctor with sad eyes. “Yes. He was my sin, my mistake. Should have been a girl, stupid child.” The doctor pulled the head medical ninja to the side. “Expect this one in again soon, and order a watch on that baby.”~Tsumi Buredo, Age 11~ “I’m home!” chimed an overjoyed Muchina, who danced into the house, carrying what looked like a ball of cloth. “…and guess what I brought?” Tsumi walked up to his dancing mother, and looked straight up at her. “What did you bring home, mommy?” he said. Muchina ignored him, and danced into the master bedroom. “We got a daughter?” Tsumi’s father, Itami, said, excitedly. “Yep! Now we’re a whole family. Me, you, and our daughter, Amy.” Tsumi was used to it, by now. Sometimes, It was almost as if he wasn’t there at all. Tsumi walked out of the house, and went exploring. Tsumi came back to the house at about 1:00 AM. Oh, hello. Muchina nodded to him as she walked to her bedroom, totally oblivious to his late arrival. The next day, he thought of a plan. While washing the dishes, he threw a plate down, and stomped on it with all his might. “TSUMI! Why did you break this plate?” Muchina yelled. “So you would know I exist.” Tsumi replied, calmly. “That was VERY naughty of you. Don’t do it again.”The next day, he did the same thing. “You broke another plate. We’re going to run out of those, you know.” Muchina said, calmly, before walking away. Tsumi repeated this day after day, until they finally ran out of plates. “Why did you break all the plates?” his mom said, as interested as ever. Tsumi did not respond with words, now was time for action. Tsumi did what he deemed necessary which, in this case, was delivering a punch to his mother’s face. Muchina was dumbfounded. “Y-you just hit me! How DARE you!?” Tsumi stared into her eyes, meeting them with his own empty pupils. “…I see… After that day, Tsumi was able to improve relations with his parents, and at last, was happy.
For the time being.
- Academy Arc:
1,000 Years After The Discovery Of The Blackheart Jutsu
“Wake up, Tsumi!” a small, squeaky voice said, before poking his cheek. “Amy…” Tsumi’s mother, Emyli said. “You know that this month is his hibernation cycle…” said his dad, wryly. “Awww…LAST month was his hibernation cycle!” said Amy. “EVERY month is his hibernation cycle” said Emyli, laughing. It was true, Tsumi loved sleeping. In fact, he slept so often, that many had stated he had managed to hibernate, such as an animal. “He’s awake! He’s awake!” shouted Amy, eager to feed her brother a breakfast she had personally prepared.
Tsumi rolled off his bed, and opened his eyes. Above him he saw the sun, in all its glory. Except….he didn’t remember the sun being so flat. Tsumi then became fully coherent, and realized that this “Sun” was in fact an omelet falling towards his face. Tsumi reacted by opening his mouth, and catching the omelet between his teeth. Amy laughed, and said “Nice catch. Know what day it is?” Tsumi thought for a moment, before saying “Well you made me breakfast, mom is actually here, dad actually got out of the shop, for once …….is it worshipping day, already?” Emyli laughed, “No, silly. It’s your birthday!” Tsumi yawned “That explains why I’m up before lunch.” Everyone laughed, except Tsumi’s dad, who merely decided to kick him. “Your fourteen now. That means that today is your manhood ceremony! Get up, or we’ll just substitute you with a rock. I doubt many will tell the difference.” Tsumi got up, and ran out the door, nervous about the ceremony, and excited about the after party.
“Tsumi Kessho, child whose name was given to him by the Dark Trinity, choose your profession.” Tsumi thought, allowing a tense silence to descend upon the crowd who watched. After what seemed like an eternity, he spoke. “I want to be a warrior.“ The elder spoke “You are hereby accepted into the academy of…“ His words were cut short, as at that moment, a stranger had walked into town, and had stabbed a small child. As the child screamed, the stranger spoke over him, his voice booming across the village where Tsumi lived. “You have three days.” The stranger said, ominously. “Three days before I take what is mine. Any who flee will be killed, any who remain…..will be killed painfully.” after which, he turned, and walked away. The village elder sat down, and began to elaborate on this man’s words.
“Long ago, the village was attacked by a man, who carried only a small sword. The village was burnt to the ground, and only two children survived.” Tsumi stared “So….what did they do about it?” he asked. The elder responded “good question, Tsumi. Nobody knows for sure, but what I heard was a man tried to fight back, and was brushed aside like a flea.” Tsumi looked at the ground in dismay “So what do WE do about it?” The village elder shrugged. “What CAN we do? Tsumi, you should go home. Enjoy the time with your family, while you still can.” Tsumi stood up with determination in his eyes “I’ll be in the ancestor’s forest.” He said, before running off to the forest, that all were forbidden to enter, for good reason.
This Forest was inhabited by the lingering regret of every soul that passed through it, and not all regret was passive. In many cases, people touched with the regrets would kill their families, before committing suicide. Not everything in this forest was evil, however. Some regrets were of not passing on knowledge, or the like. Now, most people can’t see regrets, but, for those who can, regrets look like large teardrops, containing the face of who created it. Tsumi looked for the face of a man whose regrets he had stumbled upon many times, a blacksmith named Kurcet. Tsumi had seen so many of Kurcet’s regrets, that after looking into one, he could sometimes communicate with him. This time, he found a regret that seemed bigger than the others (the bigger a regret was, the more it plagued that person). This regret was about 16 feet tall and 12 feet wide. Tsumi stuck his head into the tear drop, and, when he took it out, he was shocked beyond belief. Tsumi watched Kurcet exchange his soul for a sword, which carried the hope of the world upon it. When Tsumi returned to the village, he hurried to tell the elder of his findings. He burst into the elder’s house, both eager and nervous, only to find the elder had taken his own life, in his pitiful fear of what lay ahead. Tsumi fell to his knees, and actually cried for what seemed like an eternity. Tsumi finally picked himself up, looking for the sun overhead to check the time. The sun was rising. “Only two days left” Tsumi said, before passing out on the floor.
When he next woke up, the sun was close to setting. Tsumi walked out of the elder’s house, and back into the forest of regret. “KURCET!” he shouted repeatedly. “Where are you?!” Kurcet responded “Child, what could you possibly need at a time like this? Go spend time with your family, while you still can.” Tsumi simply replied “Where’s the sword you made for that warrior?” Kurcet looked Tsumi in the eye, and said “That sword was meant for killing the stranger.” To which Tsumi replied “I know. That’s why I want it.” Kurcet was taken aback. “You can’t kill him! He’s invincible!” Tsumi smiled, not in a happy way, but in a vampire way. “No, it’s not that he was too strong, it’s that the LAST moron behind your sword got cocky, and paid the price. I won’t fail, I swear.” Kurcet sighed. “Very well. It’s in the chamber of the Dark Trinity. If you can survive whatever they have in store, I’m sure you’ll come out just fine. The chamber is behind the elder’s house.” Tsumi walked away from the forest, and into the chamber of the dark trinity.
Inside, there were voices everywhere, as if the whole world was speaking at once, all trying to call for help, while being strangled. He continued deeper into the chamber, clutching his ears to dampen the horrific screams, until finding three Altars, inside a giant room. On the first altar, on the left side of the room, was engraved “Zo”, On the second altar, just ahead of where Tsumi was standing, was engraved “Kyn”, and on the final altar, on the right side of the room, was engraved “Rei”.
Tsumi spoke their names “Zo. Kyn. Rei. Please, if you can hear me, please help me.” The Dark trinity themselves acknowledged his plea. The three altars burst into flame, all at once. Instead of demons, however, he saw three humans, each in a black cloak, with their hoods up. They spoke “WHO DISTURBS OUR SLUMBER?! Oh. It’s YOU.” Tsumi became confused. “I’ve never met any of you in my life. And why are your hoods up?” Zo chuckled “He can see us now. Little Z has grown up.” Tsumi looked to see any sign of deception from her. He found none. “M-My name is Tsumi Kessho. Not Z.” it was Kyn who spoke this time, “Defeat that stranger, and we will tell you more, little Z.” Tsumi nodded, before remembering what he had come to ask for. “I need the Stained Soul.” All three laughed. “The Stained Soul? The blade that the old blacksmith traded his soul for? Very well.” The ground began to shake, and a large rock, in the shape of a mirror detached itself from the ground, and floated in front of Tsumi. “But on one condition. Should you fail, your soul belongs to us.” Tsumi touched his hand to the rock that was floating in front of him. “Deal.” On the flat surface of the rock appeared the words “Let this deal be sworn with blood from both parties” The dark trinity now stood on the other side of the mirror-rock. They all put their hands on it, and a sharp, needle-shaped point cut into each person’s hand. Judging by the grimaces on the faces of the dark trinity, it had been a very long time since they had suffered pain. The mirror then shattered, leaving only the Stained Soul in its place. “Go, little hero.” Said Rei, fondly.
Tsumi spent most of the time before the stranger came back training. Tsumi spent the last hour sleeping, and when the time came to fight, he was nowhere near rested. Tsumi met the stranger in front of the village, sword in hand. The stranger said to him “You wish to fight? Very well, but loss of life will be your own accountability.” Tsumi smirked “Especially yours.” The stranger drew his katana, which grew to twice its length, and a horizontal blade now sat between the middle and the top, forming a cross. “Well, at, least it’s not on fire.” Said Tsumi, as the blade caught fire. Tsumi took a moment to admire The Stained Soul.
Tsumi sighed in annoyance. “Let’s see what the Stained Soul is capable of…” The stained soul had a variety of effects on Tsumi. 1, it gave him enough motivation to realize that he could indeed beat this guy. 2, It discolored one of his eyes, making it a complete negative image of the other.
Tsumi swung his blade in an overhead slash, which was blocked, and parried the stranger’s attack. The stranger smirked. “looks like you’re not completely incompetent, like the last one” Tsumi landed an uppercut. “I’d like to think so.” The stranger, not to be defeated by such a young warrior, decided to step it up a notch. “Blackheart technique: Draconic Sword!” Shouted the stranger, confidently. The stranger’s sword melded into a large, living dragon, which coiled around the entire village, and breathed a stream of flame into the center. Tsumi, in a focused rage, was now entirely determined annihilate this stranger. Tsumi jumped right into the dragon’s mouth, and as soon as he was sucked into the digestive tract, he began to destroy the dragon. Now, the dragon’s digestive tract moves anything inside it slowly backwards. Tsumi held his sword straight up, and began spinning head-over-heels, which effectively formed a poor man’s buzz-saw. This cut the dragon in half, due to it’s own digestive tract. Due to sheer momentum, however, Tsumi also managed to severely wound the stranger. The stranger laughed, which caused the blood to splatter on the ground in large pools. "You haven't won yet. Not by a longshot!" said the stranger, fully immersed in, and loving, the feeling of battle.
Tsumi replied by cutting off the stranger's right hand (as lucky as Tsumi was, the stranger was left-handed). The stranger was smiling, now. He trembled, in what seemed to be pure hatred, combined with absolute bliss. "So, it's true. Z has returned." Tsumi ran his blade through the stranger's stomach "I don't know why people call me that, but i do know one thing. MY NAME IS TSUMI KESSHO." he said, before ripping the blade straight upwards, effectively cutting the stranger in half. Tsumi ran into the burning village, determined to save anyone and everyone he could find. Everyone he found, however, had already abandoned themselves to the flames. He searched and searched, before one person, the only one so far still coherent, told him that his family had taken refuge in the forest of Ancestors. Tsumi, now afraid for the lives of his family, ran into the forest.
Dodging regrets here and there, he called for his family. "AMY! MOM! DAD!" he shouted. "Tsumi...." said Amy, from behind him, sounding more like a zombie, and less like his sister. "Tsumi..." Said his mom, also talking slowly. "Tsumi...." Said Tsumi's dad, also slowly (not too different from the way he talked, actually...). Tsumi turned, and saw each one holding serrated knives. They walked toward him, slowly and ominously. Emyli threw her knife directly at Tsumi's head, before rushing at him, hands in a position to choke. Tsumi's reaction was automatic, he didn't react as fast as his hands did. He looked down, and saw his own sword through the heart of his mother. He pulled out the sword, and his mother continued to rush at him. He then made a sudden realization: This was not his family, not anymore. He completely dismembered his family, limb by agonizing limb, and walked slowly toward the Dark Trinity's Chamber, which lay on the outskirts of the village.
Later, back in the Blackhearts’ cave...
“Why did you call me Z? That’s not my name.” said Tsumi, to which Kyn replied “Not in this life. Let me tell you a little story. In a different universe, you were regarded as a hero. That hero’s name was Z; however, that hero was ALSO a man reborn. The very original went by the name of Project Z. Project Z’s soul was cut into 26 pieces, with each piece being put into a separate being. Each individual Project was supposed to develop their skills as much as they could, and then, once they had reached their full potential, their portion of the soul was put into a super powerful being, known as CHAOS. The rest of that story, however, is for another time. The SECOND Z created the blackheart fighting style, and, as his final act of heroism, used all three to save the girl he loved. However, during his dying minutes, he found out a horrible truth. Project Z’s soul was doom to cross different realities, all the while doomed to fail.
Anyway, Z created us so that the blackheart jutsu would not be misused, but he himself had to abide by the rules. We, as thanks for bringing us into existence, put him back together, moved him to a different universe, and renamed him Tsumi. You are Tsumi, the sin who will break the chain of failure. That mark that you wear on your chest is the mark of Xyn. Xyn is the process in which the soul is broken up and mended, and always leaves a mark. The mark usually ends up as a scar, unless it happened on a large scale, or more than once. Now, BOTH of those instances happened to you, and thus, your crystal mark was created.” Tsumi looked surprised. “Thanks for everything. I had better be going…” Zo stopped him “You still owe us your soul, boy. The village and its inhabitants were burned to the ground.” Tsumi smiled “No, I don’t. Our bargain was for me to defeat the stranger, not to save the village.” The dark trinity all laughed as hard as they could. “Well done child, come back if you need any help.” Tsumi nodded “thanks.” Kyn spoke “oh, and by the way, don’t come back.”
"It'll be better if he doesn't know." They all thought, disappearing. For, you see, these individuals who had established themselves as demonic gods were neither divine nor demonic. In fact, these were three survivors of the original settlers of the Village Of Peace, who had managed to preserve themselves using a complex string of Edo Tensei and various other summoning jutsu. In fact, It was only a very simple Genjutsu that allowed them to appear as anything divine at all.
- Genin Arc:
Tsumi’s life as a Genin was largely uneventful. He trained often, though he didn’t manage to make any friends. However, he eventually resolved to return to the ashes of his village, during a few days of vacation.
Tsumi certainly had the resolve to return to the ashes of his village, but now, a specific problem presented itself: How was Tsumi going to get to it? Tsumi was currently engaged in climbing the highest mountain within a 50 mile radius. Perhaps, if he could get high enough, he could see the village from there. However, another problem had presented itself. Wild creatures had begun to infest his village, and were attacking him by the hundreds. He had not hesitated to fight back, but it appeared that his attacks were not doing any significant damage. In fact, there seemed to be more after every attack he launched. Tsumi had holed up for three days, trying to find a way to defeat these things. He had tried trapping them, stabbing them, hurling things at them, and even burning them. Nothing worked. They just kept coming.
Over the side of the mountain, Tsumi could see a large cloud of beasts gathering at the mountain’s base. Upon further inspection, Tsumi could see thousands of dots swarming within the cloud. The creatures were preparing to attack- and someone, or something, was directing them.
Tsumi resumed climbing as fast as his legs would carry him, while the cloud slowly consumed the mountain. He reached the top, gasping in horror at the village’s new appearance. The cloud had not come chasing him, it was searching for something. Every other mountain in sight was being consumed by a cloud of the same caliber, leaving the mountain blacker than the cloud itself. The clouds of darkness all began to recede. Whatever they were searching for, they had found.
“What are you doing up here, child?” said a voice behind Tsumi. “Zo….where are Kyn and Rei?” Zo Blackheart sighed. “They were lost to these creatures- these….these slaves. They can no longer maintain the delicate balance between self-control and darkness, and are now in control of everything in the area.” Tsumi looked toward his village, which he had named “The Ashes of Peace”. “They’re gathering there. Whatever they were looking for, they found it.” Zo gasped in shock. “Z! Do you remember how to fight mental corruption?” Tsumi shook his head no. “Very well. Allow my soul to grace your blade, and receive the knowledge of how to fight the darkness.” Zo began to glow, and shattered, like glass. The Stained Soul began to shake, and took on a black hue.
Without missing a beat, Tsumi slid down the mountainside, swinging his blade at creatures left and right. He was, to his own surprise, finally capable of dealing significant damage. The beasts appeared to be fighting defensively now, rather than offensively. He ran toward the Ashes of Peace, killing as many as he could. To his dismay, however, for each one he destroyed, two stronger ones took it’s place. There were simply too many. Tsumi eventually took to avoiding them, killing only in self-defense, until he arrived at the Ashes of Peace. There, the creatures were too busy swarming into the blackheart’s cave to notice him.
Tsumi followed, sneaking through the crowd of creatures that endlessly sieged the cave. “YES…..more…..MORE……bring us MORE DARKNESS!” He heard, from the cave’s inner sanctum. “We will defeat the traitor known as Zo……and take the Village of Peace for ourselves!” They were absorbing DARKNESS?! Tsumi ran in, swatting half a dozen of the beasts to the side. “Zo was right….you have lost control, both of you.” He saw both Kyn and Rei, fused into a gooey mass of darkness. They spoke together, in a hybrid of both their voices. “No, child, we have reached enlightenment. We know now that the darkness is not something to shun, but something to accept!” They shouted, coughing up giant blobs of black matter. “You’re wrong! You’ve been corrupted beyond salvation…” The giant hybrid laughed. “It is you who is beyond salvation, child. You refuse to accept darkness, thus, you must be consumed by it!”
The giant creature sent a small tendril at Tsumi, cutting straight to his heart. Once his heart was exposed, a flash of light consumed the visual spectrum. When the light died down, he found himself in a forest, which seemed to be a negative image of reality. He took a fighting stance, getting ready for the coming onslaught. The Blackhearts also took a very gooey fighting stance, sending several more tendrils toward Tsumi, which he cut with his Stained Soul. “I see…..so THIS is your inner world!” said the large gooey mass. “Inner world?” Tsumi said, curiously. “Indeed it is. Every human has an inner world, one that defines the balance and qualities of the host. However, today, we have invaded it, as your body has not yet finished constructing it’s Inner world. Enjoy it while you can, as it will soon sate the hunger of the eternal darkness!”
The Blackhearts lunged at Tsumi, engulfing him in dark tendrils. Tsumi fought the darkness, writhing and slicing every which way, but he knew it was no use.
The world shattered, and Tsumi regained his ability to see outside of his inner world. The blackhearts were about to pump something into him. He did the only thing he could think of- he cut the tendril with sword, and ran as fast as he could, discovering a newfound level of speed. He ran and ran, all the way home. He was gonna get stronger, and we was going to return to the ashes of his village.
It was a promise.
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| Arsenal: - Styles:
N/A
- Equipment:
Name: Retractable Wrist Blade Rank: C Type: Close Range - Gauntlet Quantity: 1 Description: As its name implies, the user equips these retractable wrist blades so that the attach to their forearm without risking exposure. These blades can spring forth when needed to surprise any opponent fought in hand to hand combat. Name: Scimitar/Saber Rank: C Type: Close Range - Exotic Blade Quantity: 1 Description: A scimitar or saber is a backsword with a long curved blade, up to four feet in length, and is often thought of as having a ridge near the end. Due to its curved design and light weight, it is ideal for slashing and thrusting. Name: The Stained Soul Rank: B Type: Close Range - Exotic Blade Quantity: 1 Description: A Chakra-conductive exotic blade, wielded by Tsumi. It has no special qualities, other than a thin, 20-foot chain of blades on the bottom of the blade which, at the push of a button, can be stored inside the handle (the compartment also spans inside the hand guards). - Appearance:
Name: The Dreambreaker Rank: B Type: Close Range - Defensive Blade Quantity: 1 Description: A Chakra-conductive blade, wielded by Tsumi. It contains a mechanism similar to that of The Stained Soul, however, its 50-foot chain is not sharp, but sturdy, and instead of being a sharp chain, has a sharp point. The chain can support up to 250 pounds of weight. The sword cannot be broken, save for weapons that are at least 1 rank above it. - Appearance:
- Jutsu:
- Academy Jutsu:
Name: Replacement Technique - Kawarimi No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: This technique requires no hand seals and allows the user to switch places with a similarly sized non-living object nearby in an instant; so fast that it gives off the illusion that the user has been struck for a small while. This object can be anything from a log of wood to a backpack, but it must be set aside and determined beforehand to replace with, and cannot be tethered down or attached to anything. Since this technique relies on the user moving at incredible speeds, their feet must be touching the ground to use the Replacement technique. Due to the strain such high speeds can be used, this technique may only be used a certain amount of times dependent on rank. [C=2 per topic, B= 4 per topic, A= 6 per topic, S= 8 per topic]
Name: Transformation Technique - Henge No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: N/A
Description: By performing a single hand seal, this jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object in a puff of smoke. This technique only warps the user's image, but does not actually change any part about them. When the technique ends, the user will assume their original form. This technique can be maintained indefinitely without expending more chakra, but does require good mental stability to hold onto the image.
Name: Basic Clone Technique - Bunshin No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: N/A
Description: The user will perform three hand seals before creating one or more intangible copies that share the same appearance as the user. Each clone does not require the hand seals to be remade, but do cost additional chakra to create. The clone has no capability to attack, to speak, or to do anything more than distract the enemy. A single attack that passes through the clone will disperse it back into nothing. These clones are the most basic technique and without substance they lack the ability to make noise, though the technique does give them a shadow. They must remain within 10 meters of the user at all times.
Name: Rope Escaping Technique - Nawanuke No Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close
Element: N/A
Description: A technique that requires deep concentration after having been tied up using ordinary rope, wire, or string. If allowed to concentrate for two full posts, the user can activate this technique and escape on the third post.
Name: Genjutsu Release - Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self | Contact (Friendly)
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is used to dispel an illusion the user, or otherwise a nearby friendly, has been caught in. By forming a hand seal and disrupting their own chakra, the user can dispel any Genjutsu they are placed under if enough chakra is used up. It can also be used by making contact with a nearby person who is caught in a genjutsu, and disrupting their chakra. [See: INSERT LINK]
Name: Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Feet
Element: N/A
Description: The art of the tree climbing is the most common way for a low ranked shinobi to train them in focusing their chakra better. However, it's use allows the user to focus chakra into the soles of their feet in a way that causes them to stick to surfaces well enough to support their weight. It allows the user to walk up vertical walls or across ceilings upside-down. It can also be used to stick weaponry on the bottoms of their feet discreetly.
Name: Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Feet
Element: N/A
Description: A variation of the Act of Tree Climbing, this technique allows the user to focus an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, so that they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water. Once mastered, it allows the user to walk across the surface of any liquid.
Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: E
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: -
Range: Close
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu, typically they are stored within scrolls. These items hold no potential energy and are summoned in an unmoving fashion (no projectiles firing from a scroll when unsealed). Items sealed with this technique are unaffected by time. This is the most basic form of technique and as such can only store 1 item per seal.
Name: Detonate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Range: Close
Description: This technique detonates an explosive, tag placed by the user of this technique, at will. This technique is known for using only a single hand sign and the expenditure of chakra to allow for practically sentient detonation of explosives rather than waiting the correct amount of time using a trip wire. This same technique can be used to detonate several explosive tags at once so long as they were all placed by the user of this technique.
- Kenjutsu:
Name: Quick Draw
Rank: D
Cost: E
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:[/] N/A
Range: Close
Clan/Bloodline: N/A
Description: A very simple Kenjutsu move utilizing the users speed. In an instant blur the user can grab their sword to make it look like it even just appeared into their hand. This can be used to ambush the opponent before they can respond.
Name: Ishibari - Stone Needles
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Range: Weapon Range
Element: N/A
Description: This technique makes use of the users chakra as a paralysing agent. The user throws kunai with wires attached at the opponent. Once the enemy is hit, chakra is run through the string to paralyse the opponent, which will serve to either incapacitate the enemy or allow the user or an ally to attack. However, against those who can absorb chakra, this technique could backfire as the target may simply steal chakra from the user, while exhibiting immunity to the paralysis. The paralysis effect may also be cancelled by severing the wire connection between the kunai and the user.
Name: Shōgeki Ha - Shock Blade
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Range: Weapon Range
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique requires Chakra Conductivity or a Chakra Conductive Weapon. No frills, this technqiue simply coats a weapon in Raiton chakra, allowing for each cut of the blade to inflict numbing across the entirety of a limb, as well as first-degree burns around the area of the cut.
Name: Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu - Cherry Blossom Snow Storm Technnique
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Range: Throwing Range
Element: N/A
Description: The user will hurl kunai with pouches attached at her or his target. When they impact the pouches explode, releasing small explosive notes. Due to the large number of kunai thrown, a shower of notes will rain down on her/his target. She/he will then throw one final kunai with an active explosive note at her/his target. It will begin to burn, and by igniting the falling smaller notes it will cause a gigantic explosion.
- Ninjutsu:
- Raiton-based Ninjutsu:
Name: Raiton Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: B
Cost: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.
Name: Kiba Kyuu no Jutsu
Rank: B
Cost: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: The evolution of Raiton Raikyuu, this time, the sphere turns into a piercing fang when thrown at the opponent giving him not only lightning damage, but also a small piercing wound. If this jutsu hits a preexisting wound, then the opponent will experience immense pain and the muscles in that area will spasm uncontrollably for one post.
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Varied
Element: Raiton (Lightning)
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock.
Chakra Cost: C (10 Meters), B (20 Meters), A (30 Meters)
- Katon-based Ninjutsu:
Name: Gouryuuka no Jutsu - Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Cost: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 meters
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Name: Haisekishou - Burning Ash Accumulation
Rank: B
Cost: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 meters
Element: Katon
Description: Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, Asuma will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when Asuma clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.
- Non-elemental Ninjutsu:
Name: Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Far. Very, very far.
Element: N/A
Description: Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the user and an individual(s) to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.
Name: Kekkai Houjin - Barrier Method Battle Array
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kekkai Houjin is a high-level Ninjutsu trap technique. An array of explosive markers are jointly placed around the boundary of an area. If any opponent walks through the boundary, the seals will activate and explode.
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| | Subject: Re: Buredo, Tsumi [Seikogakure] [Done] Tue Nov 26, 2013 10:33 am | |
| Name: Advanced Speed
Rank: B
Type: Physical
Description: Training in high-speed movement has given the shinobi valiant speed that can perform on the level of olympic sprinters with no effort. By now, the ninja can run twice as fast as their untalented peers, and can usually run for miles on end without breaking a sweat.
Add 15% speed increase, please.
Name: One-Handed Seals
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Description: the ninja discovers a unique talent which allows them to mix chakra by performing seals with only one hand. With an ability such as this, the ninja can fight while also performing jutsu, delivering surprise attacks to their enemies. Since those who can perform one-handed seals are naturally good at what their talents, they are even capable of performing hand seals behind themselves, leaving the enemy oblivious to the ninja's next attack.
Do note that casting will be slower for when you use one hand.
Name: Large Chakra Capacity
Rank: B
Type: Chakra-Based
Description: The ninja continues their mediation and physical training which further increases their chakra capacity. Ninja with large chakra capacities have an increased chakra of +25%
Change the 25% to 15%
Name: Ninjutsu Adept
Rank: B
Type: Chakra Based
Description: A trait possessed by ninja who have trained to improve their Ninjutsu ability and acquire rigorous control over their techniques. After much training, the ninja becomes more experienced and exerts more control over the art of Ninjutsu. The potency of their Ninjutsu control means that the cost of each Ninjutsu technique is reduced by 20% (rounded up), as well as recognizing any C-rank and lower Open Ninjutsu.
Change the 20% to 15% | |
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| | Subject: Re: Buredo, Tsumi [Seikogakure] [Done] Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:49 pm | |
| This looks quite well made actually the only thing i see is on one handed seals you still need to put that the casting is slowed due to only using one hand
Also Kuchiyose no Jutsu now takes up a SC slot and to own the summoning scroll (If you want a specific animal and want to control who else can summon it) Is another SC slot. | |
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