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| Subject: Suishin, Amaterasu Sun Nov 24, 2013 11:54 pm | |
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Playby: Ruri Gokou aka Kuroneko from Oreimo Basic Character Information: Name: Suishin, Amaterasu Alias / Nickname: At S rank: Kazan aijin (Volcanic Mistress) Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance:Amaterasu is 160 cm tall and weighs 43 kg. Her measurements are B77/W53/H80. She has long straight black hair that reaches down to her derrière neatly cut at the forehead in a hime-style, white skin, pointed red eyes, and a birthmark under her left eye. She has soft silk cream like skin with no markings at all except for the callus on her hands from holding her sword. She holds no muscle on her arms just enough to wield her blade. Amaterasu has kept her nails long and the tips painting a light purple. Amaterasu’s attire consists of a shortened kimono cut at the top to show off her shoulders with white trimmings. The sleeves stop half way between her elbow and wrist with white cuffs as well. Her kimono is also cut short at the bottom reaching half way up her knees showing off her long silky legs. Her kimono is done in a floral pattern that stretches up the sleeves down her back, front and end of her kimono. On her right hip she carries an item pouch to store her weapon of choice senbon. Around her waist a white obi sash tied in a butterfly bow at the back with two long ends reaching down to her knees. In her hair Amaterasu keeps a number of small flower like pins in her hair a total of twenty that go all the way down placed in certain spots. The flowers all though they look like sakura blossoms they are really small pink shuriken designed to look like flowers. This is so that when an opponent goes to grab her hair their hand will be ripped apart. Personality: Amaterasu is a very strict person, often criticizing the bad behaviour and habits of the others, causing most of them to apologize, fearing that they might invoke her wrath. She is also very impatient, disliking people who don't answer her questions quickly enough. This, coupled with her own tragic childhood, caused many of her people to avoid her due to her social awkwardness. However, she has a great sense of justice and pride in being a kunoichi. Despite her reserved personality Amaterasu shown to have very little modesty and an unusual view on the concept in general. Many of her clothes are skimpy, revealing and feminine. Finally, Amaterasu seems to have no problem with men seeing her naked. She feels no discomfort in bathing with men due to the fact that she used to shower with her nephews when she was younger. When she is in the hot springs and learns the males are peeping, she will want invite them to bath on the female side. It was shown that Amaterasu can't hold her liquor. While drunk, she acts very aggressive towards others, this is shown by her behaviour towards her fellow shinobi. She also seems to have a problem recognizing people while being drunk. Amaterasu has a secret fondness for smut and erotic novels. Due to reading these novels Amaterasu has a tendency to ask whether she should be punished after she has done something, regardless of if it was good or bad, possibly indicating that she's a masochist. She has even become quite seductive trying to seduce or come on to any good looking male she sees even her own team-mates. Amaterasu is not above flirting with only men she will flirt with attractive women as well, even attempt to seduce them leading her to be bisexual. Your Ninja Way: All men and women are equal Goals: To be the world’s Greatest and Strongest Lava Sword Style Kunoichi Bloodline Information: Bloodline Name: Yoton (Lava Release) Kekkei Genkai | Bloodline Techniques: Lava Release (熔遁; 溶遁, Yōton) is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that combines fire and earth-based chakra to create lava and related substances that can serve multi-faceted purposes. In most cases, the techniques involving Lava Release have followed the literal name; creating molten balls which can be launched at the opponent, or a liquid blast that would melt anything it came in contact with. However, some users have been seen using it to create a type of quicklime, rubber, or even tar in some scenarios. Approved Bloodline Application Link: http://www.narutor.org/t29559-lava-release-2907636929-2834236929-y333tonClan Information: Clan Name: N/A Clan History:Clan Application Link:Role Information: Title: Genin Rank: C Rank Residency: Wanderer, Ex Kumogakure Organization | Group: N/A Skill Information: Skill Specialty:- Main:Kenjutsu - Sub: Ninjutsu - Tertiary:Elemental Affinity:- Main: Katon - Sub: Doton - Advanced: Yoton Special Characteristics: 1 from Clan SC and 7 from Free SC Bonanza event Special Characteristics:- Spoiler:
Name: Pain Tolerance Prerequisites: Rank: C-S, C Range:self Description: Pain tolerance one can develop through training or be born with natural. Pain tolerance is the ability to tolerate certain levels of pain that may flow through the body. At C rank the lowest stage ones pain tolerance is rather low only able to resist slight cracking of bones, bruising of bones or shallow gashes on the skin as well as first degree burns. Tiny lacerations one will not feel.
Name: Enhanced Reaction Time Prerequisites: Rank: C-S, C Range:Self Description: Reaction time is the interval time between the presentation of a stimulus and the initiation of the muscular response to that stimulus. Through rigorous training certain shinobi/Kunoichi gain an increase to their reaction time. By increasing ones reaction time it allows them to react to certain situations a lot faster than the average kunoichi/shinobi. At the C rank ones reaction time is increased by 10% allowing them to react 10% faster than others.
Name: Enhanced Speed Prerequisites: Rank: C-S, C Range: Description: Through rigorous training certain shinobi/Kunoichi gain an increase to their movement speed. This speed increases over years of painful training but the fruits of the labour appear shortly after with a 10% speed increase.
Name: Enhanced Chakra Reserves Prerequisites: N/A Rank: C Range:Self Description: This is an ability that some can achieve by training hard or simply being born with. The enhanced chakra reserves is a natural boost to ones chakra levels increasing them by 10%
Name:Chakra Control: Ninjutsu Prerequisites:N/A Rank:C-S, C Range:Self Description:Through training one can achieve a higher level of control over their chakra reserves. By developing ones chakra control one will use less chakra when using their Ninjutsu. A shinobi/kunoichi with higher chakra control will use 10% less chakra on ninjutsu
Name: Locksmith Rank: C Requirement: 400 Word Training Topic or PAC Purchase Description: A shinobi can devote themselves to the art of picking locks. It is not always a skill everyone focuses on when you can usually break through the locks. However some types prefer the ability to enter a place rather quietly through picking a lock. This ability allows them to do just that. They carry the tools required for it and are quite experienced in leaving behind no real trace the lock was tampered with.
Name: Mistress of Seduction Prerequisites:N/A Rank: C Range:Self Description: Those who are trained in the art of seduction are able to use their appeal to seduce those of the same or opposite sex. At C rank those who are weak willed to the opposite sex are rather easy to be seduced by those who specialise in the art of seduction. Amaterasu is one such individual and makes use of her appeal and sexual nature to manipulate, seduce and twist others to do her bidding. Those with a stronger will are harder to break at the lowest level of C rank. At C rank it is easier to seduce genin then it is to deceive Chunin and up. This is also the same with those who have a higher sex drive than others it allows them to be seduced than those with barely any sex drive at all.
Name: Mistress of Deception Prerequisites:N/A Rank: C Range:Self Description: Deception could be regarded as a key aspect to shinobi/kunoichi life styles. Deception is the ability to deceive others. Deception includes several types of communications or omissions that serve to distort or omit the complete truth. Deception itself is intentionally managing verbal and/or nonverbal messages so that the message receiver will believe in a way that the message sender knows is false. Intent is critical with regard to deception. The five primary forms of deception are: 1.Lies: making up information or giving information that is the opposite or very different from the truth. 2.Equivocations: making an indirect, ambiguous, or contradictory statement. 3.Concealments: omitting information that is important or relevant to the given context, or engaging in behavior that helps hide relevant information. 4.Exaggerations: overstatement or stretching the truth to a degree. 5.Understatements: minimization or downplaying aspects of the truth
At C rank it is easier to deceive, lie even manipulate those with weaker wills or those who are incredibly trusting. At C rank it is easier to deceive genin then it is to deceive Chunin and up.
History Information: History:- Birth Arc:
Amaterasu was born in kumogakure to Suishin, Terumi and Korone, Yusuke. Her mother was born with the Yoton or Lava Release bloodline and had been passed down onto her. Like most born with the Yoton she was born with a much tougher skin them most as well as a resistance to lava allowing her to touch it without being burnt for only a few minutes before needing to pull away.
For Amaterasu the first few years of her life were peaceful until on her third birthday. Her parents both shinobi never returned from one of their missions, killed in action. Being orphaned Amaterasu was taken in by her mothers parents Suishin, Takama and Suishin, Kirino. Her grandfather like her mother was also born with the Yoton bloodline. She was raised by her grandparents who were also looking after her five nephews where they did everything together even shower.
When Amaterasu was five her grandfather began to instruct her on the usage of her Kekkei Genkai training her to first start using her fire nature chakra. While her grandfather instructed her bloodline her grandmother taught her to use chakra and chakra control in order to ensure she had perfect control over her chakra reserves.
At the age of 7 her grandfather after instructing her in the basics of fire nature started instructing her in the basics of earth nature chakra allowing her to get a feel for the two elements. At the age of eight her grandfather starting to instruct her on the basics of her yoton nature chakra to put fire and earth together to form her lava release just enough to create a tiny glob of lava. Her control over her chakra had improved allowing her to spend less energy on her techniques. Her grandparents had always forced her to work on her physical abilities to boost her speed and strength so she would be ready for the Shinobi Academy.
- Academy Arc:
At the age of 8 Amaterasu began her first year of the Shinobi Academy with many hopeful children dreaming of becoming Shinobi or Kunoichi. Amaterasu was always shy rather socially awkward around others having spent most of her years with her parents or grandparents rarely interacting with kids her own age. She stayed in the back becoming a social outcast in class. While a genius and at the top of her class she was thought of arrogant as when others would talk her with she'd walk away unsure of what to say.
By the age of ten Amaterasu was at the top of her class however due to being raised by nephews she had no quarrels with male classmates seeing her naked especially after taijutsu class. She would enter the boy shower rooms only to be escorted into the girls shower room by a female teacher. She always questioned why she couldn't shower with the boys as she did it with her nephews and saw nothing wrong with it leaving the teachers stunned unable to answer.
By twelve Amaterasu was the top Kunoichi in her year group when the graduation age came. She had excelled in Yoton ninjutsu learning a few techniques that revolved around her bloodline Yōton: Gomuheki (Lava Release: Rubber Wall), Yoton: Yōgan katamari (Lava Release:Lava Globs) and Yōton: Sekkaigyō no Jutsu (Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique) as well as one katon and doton ninjutsu Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu and Doton: Doro Gaeshi. She passed the genin exams with flying colours graduating as the rookie of her year group.
- Genin Arc:
By twelve Amaterasu had become an official genin of the village and as a reward her grandfather handed to her a sword that was forged at her birth a katana named the 'Borukanika' or 'Volcanic Beast'. With this blade she began to practice a style of sword play she was beginning to create the Youyuu-Roshintouryuu or Molten Core Sword Style, a sword style that would some day utilise her yoton chakra nature to encase her blade in lava style chakra to create a pure offensive style. As she practice kenjutsu with her grandfather she studied with her two team-mates under their teacher a veteran jounin of kumogakure no sato.
By her thirteenth birthday her squad had completed a number of low to high class C rank missions as well as a number of low B rank missions. There instructor had increased their physical regime to increase their speed, strength, perception, chakra control and chakra reserves. Her kenjutsu was sharpened with her grandfather coming to low C. Amaterasu had trained with the jutsu she knew in order to perfect them as it wasn't how many techniques you knew but how skilled you were with the few you had.
At the age of fourteen Amaterasu's control and her chakra reserves had spiked with a small increase to her strength and speed. She had always developed something called 'sakki' or killer intent which is the ability to release and direct ones killer intent to appear more threatening to others. By fourteen she had become a beautiful young woman but she had no modesty dressing in skimpy clothes and wasn't afraid to get naked around her two male teammates and male teacher. When they were at the hot springs and she knew they were peeping she'd invite them over. It was also at this age she became interested in smut/erotic romance novels.
By fifteen they participated in their first chunin exams. While they had passed the first test and the second test during the third test although she tried hard she was not handed the rank of genin. To her horror her two team-mates were promoted. She thought this was completely unfair and when she asked her sensei he told her 'Your use as a woman is to help your team-mates or breed new shinobi'. This infuriated her and catching her sensei off guard she melted him with her lava release and fled the village to become a wanderer.
- Wanderer Arc:
At sixteen Amaterasu had been wandering the lands for a year now learning new things and learning to use her sexuality as a weapon to seduce the hearts of men into giving her what she wanted, mainly money before leaving them or threatening to melt them.
By seventeen Amaterasu had began to develop her Youyuu-Roshintouryuu creating the kata and the first two techniques the Nami and Kanketsusen. She would steal chakra blades from shinobi who attacked her and practiced with them until they had melted away from her bloodline in order to gain experience with using her lava in her kenjutsu form. Amaterasu had teamed up with other wanders learning from them how to survive as well as the best way to exploit members of the opposite sex leading to many being left with their pants around their legs or without their clothes and no money.
By eighteen Amaterasu had finished her third stance and mastered it with the first two. Her speed, strength had increased as well beyond that of a regular genin she had even built up her resistance to lava possessing the ability to be completely submerged in lava for up to five minutes. Her ability to release Sakki had also grown allowing her to frighten thieves and bandits on the road into giving up their possessions by releasing her sakki and melting one of her attackers with her lava release.
Arsenal: - Styles Page:
Style Name: Youyuu-Roshintouryuu (Molten Core Sword Style) Style Type: [Taijutsu, Weaponry, or Kenjutsu] Rank: C-S Style Weapon: The Youyuu-Roshintouryuu is a Sword based style of fighting as such a sword is necessary for it to be used. The preferred sword type is a Wakizashi, Katana, Nodachi or Uchigatana. Description: The Youyuu-Roshintouryuu or Molten Core Sword Style is a unique offensive sword style invented and created by Amaterasu. The Youyuu-Roshintouryuu focuses on speed and strength disregarding defence relying purely on offence. The Youyuu-Roshintouryuu was forged to fit along with the Yoton or Lava Release bloodline. The Youyuu-Roshin is designed for a chakra conductive blade that has been specially made to withstand the raw heat of the lava release bloodline to have the length of the blade encased in molten rock. The Molten rock is then utilised in a various number of sword stances which uses the lava to eat/melt through anything it comes in contact. The lava can be expelled upon contact letting it flow forth to melt a larger radius. It is especially deadly against flesh and blood opponents as the lava will not only burn upon contact but flow forth and should it flow into the body will melt away from the inside out.
- Equipment Page:
Name: Sakura Blossom Shuriken Appearance:These shuriken take the shape of tiny sakura blossoms. Each sakura blossom is two inches in length and coloured pink and specifically designed to look more like a sakura blossom than a shuriken allowing Amaterasu's foes to mistake them as hair pins. - Spoiler:
Rank: C Range: 25 meters/35mph Special Abilities: N/A Origin:The Sakura Blossom Shuriken are a style of shuriken designed and used by Amaterasu Suishin. These shuriken are mainly kept in her hair used as a last resort. The shuriken were made for the single purpose of keeping her hair safe and stopping its length being used against her in combat. Name: Borukanika (Volcanic Beast) Appearance:- Spoiler:
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Volcanica has a blade length of 20 inches and the length of the tsuka (hilt) is 6 inches making the blade 26 inches long slightly longer than the average katana by 3 inches. The blade has been forged through a Soshu Kitae method layering seven steals to create a stronger more durable blade. The Tsuka is wrapped in black silk and bound tightly. A number of different types of file markings are etched into the tsuka, including horizontal, slanted, and checked, known as ichi-monji, ko-sujikai, sujikai, ō-sujikai, katte-agari, shinogi-kiri-sujikai, taka-no-ha, and gyaku-taka-no-ha. The Tsuba or guard of the blade is a wide oval surrounded by golden flames. The Saya or scabbard is black with gold trimmings at the top and the same markings as the Tsuka with a yellow flame pattern running up its length. Attached to the end of the Tsuka is a long flowing silk blood red ribbon that is twenty inches long Rank: C Range: Length of blade and users arm Special Abilities: N/A Origin:Volcanica is a blade that was forged for Amaterasu upon her birth and handed to her upon graduating the academy by her grandparents. The blade was forged with the sevejn layers method to increase its sharp edge and durability.
- Jutsu Page:
Name: Youyuu-Roshintouryuu: Ichiban no Funka: Nami (Molten Core Sword Style: First Eruption: Wave) Rank: C Cost: 0 Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Range: Length of the Blade Description: The Nami or Wave is the first technique of the Youyuu-Roshintouryuu. To perform the Nami Amaterasu will fall into a basic Battojutsu stance gripping the tsuka of his blade. Kicking off with his right foot he will lung towards his target and as he draws his sword will throw the saya towards his opponent to distract them as he swings his sword in a wide arc on a horizontal angle.
Name: Youyuu-Roshintoury: Niban no Funka: Kanketsusen (Molten Core Sword Style: Second Eruption: Geyser) Rank: C Cost: 0 Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Range: Length of the Blade Description: The Kanketsusen or Geyser is the Second technique of Amaterasu’s Youyuu-Roshintouryuu. Amaterasu will move forward in a zig zag pattern in an attempt to disorient his opponent and to prevent his movements from being predicted by moving erratically. When he is only inches from his foe he will jump upwards into the air gripping his sword with both hands holding it in a reverse grip so the blade points down with his feet. He will aim to come down on his foe to impale the blade into their skull.
Name: Youyuu-Roshintouryuu: Sanban no Funka: Nagare (Molten Core Sword Style: Third Eruption: Flow) Rank: C Cost: 0 Type: Kenjutsu Element: N/A Range: Length of the Blade Description: The third technique of the Youyuu-Roshintouryuu the Nagare or Flow is a little more straight forward then the other techniques. To perform the Nagare Amaterasu will simply rush his foe thrusting his blade forward with the intent to impale them upon its edge using his sword hand to thrust the blade forth and coming up with his left hand to punch the end of the hilt to force the blade forward with extra piercing strength.
Name: Yōton: Gomuheki (Lava Release: Rubber Wall) Rank: C Cost: D Type: Ninjutsu Element:Yoton Range: 0-5 metres Description: The user creates a torrent of lava from the ground directly in front of them, which then forms into a wall possessing immense durability due to its rubbery consistency that allows the material to deform when attacked, meaning it can both absorb and dissipate the force behind a blow rather than just simply obstruct it. This technique can also be used to provide reinforcement to a pre-existing barrier.
Name: Yoton: Yōgan katamari (Lava Release:Lava Globs) Rank: C-A rank (C-rank being a single glob, B-rank for a larger range, and A-rank for the ability to produce numerous globs with the technique.) Cost: C=D,B=C, A=B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Yoton Range: 0-5 metres Description: Using this technique, the user is able to create blobs which can be used offensively, or possibly to seal off exits and destroy incoming weapons. - In the case of more advanced shinobi, it is possible to use it in a B-rank manner and produce a small wave instead, which would be cast at anything in front of the user, or even launch numerous small molten rocks out at the opponent for A-rank.
Name: Yōton: Sekkaigyō no Jutsu (Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique) Rank: C Cost: D Type: Ninjutsu Element: Yoton Range: 0-10 metres Description: This technique makes use of the Lava Release kekkei genkai where the user expels a large quantity of quicklime from her mouth, capable of inflicting damage to an opponent. This ability can also be manipulated in order to restrict the intended target's movements, as after the initial blast the remnants of the substance can act in a similar manner to quick-drying cement. However, the technique requires the addition of water to set off the necessary reaction to make the substance harden. This can be easily achieved through the use of a Water Release, which can also serve to increase the area covered by the substance, thus further increasing the potential range of the technique.
Name: Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique) Rank: C Cost: D Type: Ninjutsu Range: 5 meters Element: Katon Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Canon: Yes
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| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Fri Nov 29, 2013 12:35 am | |
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- Name: Tough Skin
Prerequisites: Rank: C Range:self Description: Thanks to their separate heritage, members with this Kekkei Genkai have grown to have the added bonus of resilience towards physical damage. Though they can still be cut by tools such as kunai and katana, a basic blunt weapon would do less physical harm to their body; this technique adds some resistance to physical trauma, to say the least. (10% to Durability) Toughness is really vague and as a reslt makes a poor SC. I advise agianst this as it mostly does nothing for you at this rank. If it was pain tolerance, etc. it would make more sense. but 10% toughness... You can't have an SC for reducing the cost of all jutsu. pick 1 type only. Your denied SC and Yoton, again, pick 1 area to reduce chakra, ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc. | |
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| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Fri Nov 29, 2013 3:36 am | |
| I've edited the tough skin and put the sc to only reducing ninjutsu. Also - Quote :
- Your denied SC and Yoton, again, pick 1 area to reduce chakra, ninjutsu, genjutsu, etc.
I get the SC for jutsu but what's the yoton for? As my yoton mastery only reduced my yoton ninjutsu chakra cost. | |
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| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Mon Dec 02, 2013 12:40 am | |
| You may only have 1 chakra reducing SC. Sorry I have no idea how I typoed that badly. Anyway, 1 chakra reducing SC, and no stacking with another normal SC.
No lava resist. That's kinda rediculous. That's like saying I have water rsist so if I get in the deep ocean, I wouldn't implode. That's way above the C rank.
"For a set period of time with a C rank lava resistance they can be emerged fully in lava for 5 posts before beginning to burn same with any limb."
The problem is. There is no real rank to lava. It's hot enough to melt rock, and anything of melted rock, is WAY above C. You may resist the heat from the lava, not the lava itself.
While a ninja may sense evil intent if it's very strong, look at sasuke and his chakra for example, evilness clearly effects chakra and that can be sensed, unless they are far stronger than you, this really isn't a big problem. The murderous SC has to go. | |
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| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:26 am | |
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- Name: Youyuu-Roshintouryuu: Ichiban no Funka: Nami (Molten Core Sword Style: First Eruption: Wave)
Rank: C Cost: When using chakra C Type: Kenjutsu Element: When using nature chakra: Lava Range: Length of the Blade Description: The Nami or Wave is the first technique of the Youyuu-Roshintouryuu. To perform the Nami Amaterasu will fall into a basic Battojutsu stance gripping the tsuka of his blade. Kicking off with his right foot he will lung towards his target and as he draws his sword will throw the saya towards his opponent to distract them as he swings his sword in a wide arc on a horizontal angle.
When Amaterasu utilises a chakra conducting blade allowing his lava release to flow into the blade encasing it in molten rock does the attack become deadlier. Upon drawing the blade he lets his chakra flow into the blade encasing it in molten rock and when he slashes the molten lava will flick off the blade creating a thin line of molten rock to burn through flesh, wood, clothing and metal. Due to the stream of lava only be an inch thick it can only cause first degree burning, but the molten rock and cause material to become alight with fire. Okay no offense but we have lgic issues mostly. The above makes no sense. Lava is defined as molten rock. Rock heated to the point it melted. Now if the heat in lava has melted the rock...it's going to obliverate someone. This would likely eat through their skin and kill them. I have difficulties of seeing ANY lava jutsu at C rank...You don't mess with lava. And this is mostly a "it's this rank so it does low damage" thing...but it makes no sense logically. - Quote :
- Name: Youyuu-Roshintoury: Niban no Funka: Kanketsusen (Molten Core Sword Style: Second Eruption: Geyser)
Rank: C Cost: When using chakra C Type: Kenjutsu Element: When using nature chakra: Lava Range: Length of the Blade Description: The Kanketsusen or Geyser is the Second technique of Amaterasu’s Youyuu-Roshintouryuu. Amaterasu will move forward in a zig zag pattern in an attempt to disorient his opponent and to prevent his movements from being predicted by moving erratically. When he is only inches from his foe he will jump upwards into the air gripping his sword with both hands holding it in a reverse grip so the blade points down with his feet. He will aim to come down on his foe to impale the blade into their skull.
While the first part of the technique has no sense when using a chakra conductive blade can Amaterasu bring out the second techniques full potential. During the fall Amaterasu will mould lava chakra into his sword to encase it in molten rock. When the blade impales the ground or even flesh he releases the molten rock from the tip of the blade and expels outwards and upwards. Erupting upwards in front of him will be a three inch thick two foot high geyser of lava, designed that should the opponent dodge by stepping back the geyser will encase them in lava. The molten rock is hot enough to cause first degree burning and scaring. Continuing on seems pointless, as we have the same issue as above. If the heat is hot enough to melt rock, it will probably cause you heat stroke just being near it unprotected, or worse. This is saying the heat can melt rock but only slightly burns skin....makes no sense. It's not your fault here. It's just an insanely hard element to use at C rank, because the very element itself is so beyond C rank. frankly this clan is broken and needs fixing so only B+ ranks can use lava, or A+ even. But again, not your fault you have a hard element to use. I like the idea of lava sword, it's just not practical for C rank. The low damage of C and the high damaging nature of lava just conflict so much. It will be far more practical to use lava itself at B or higher ranks. | |
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| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Wed Dec 04, 2013 12:05 am | |
| I'd advise that for Lava Release techniques of C rank, it'd basically just create droplets of lava or spawn a small area of lava that is easily dodged. B rank would be when you can start using more direct lava attacks. | |
| | | Amaterasu Suishin Member
| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Wed Dec 04, 2013 12:20 am | |
| Would I be able to have 2 profiles for the jutsu? When just kenjutsu and using no chakra so no lava on my blade C rank and when I do channel chakra into the blade encasing it in lava it becomes B rank. Of course I will buy/train for the jutsu when I am able to use there B rank profile | |
| | | GenShinigami Administrator
| Subject: Re: Suishin, Amaterasu Wed Dec 04, 2013 3:45 am | |
| With these new changes, I think that your account can be approved. Thank you for your patience! | |
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